I think you didn't noticed you can do it. You've just missed the train station . Less shading between the nostrils, more black in the nostrils, a powerful detail and a full mouth, and a simple chinline with perhaps some stretches of subtle shades in the neck, pushing against the faceline. Little hair around the face that fades out to nothing and that shapes the face; you weren't too far away . Would have left the shades around the eyes and continued this butterfly-pattern in the neck. Perhaps a little in the cheaks...
A little hour or more would had done it I think...but what's an hour?
A little hour or more would had done it I think...but what's an hour?